The
Burning Pen
Through the Looking Glass
by Ruth Solomon
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CHAPTER 23
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Chapter 23 ~ A Dose of Reality 1
Once again, Hermione was lifted to the heights by the Transfiguration teacher’s
foreplay. Normally, extra credit didn’t take this long, not much preparation
necessary. Students came to him ready to do what needed to be done. To be
honest, he could have engaged Hermione quicker than he was doing, and might have
if he had someone following, but he was free for the rest of the night. Besides,
it was rather delightful experiencing her responses as he kissed and licked her
body.
Snape was still a teacher, and felt she should expect the best treatment from a
wizard she engaged. As her first, he could instill this expectancy in her,
hoping that she would never accept anything less from a lover. He could teach
her to be demanding and a bit selfish when it came to sex.
Hermione arched and sighed under the wizard, particularly when his soft mouth
moved over her breasts and belly, and she caressed him as well, feeling his
muscles bunch and flex under her hand, alive, strong . . . sensual. His fingers
tapped her skin, finding erotic zones, his lips following, pressed to her
throat, her wrists, even her armpits, which tickled. He encouraged her to touch
his cock, feel its weight, girth and hardness, as well as his balls, which were
cool and delicate in her palm. He didn’t encourage her to perform oral sex
however. Maybe another time if she were willing.
Hermione gasped as the wizard turned her over to her stomach and rested his cock
on her buttocks, sliding it gently through the cleft several times until she was
squirming, the ache at her core becoming more intense as he kissed her
shoulders, then followed her spine with his lips, running his tongue over the
small of her back and gently biting at her buttocks, which were soft and full
like twin pillows.
”Oh, Professor,” Hermione groaned, her voice full of need as he turned her back
over, looking down at her flushed and heated face. “I’m so ready for this.”
He could smell the sweet, clean musk of her arousal now.
”Let me check,” he breathed, kissing her mouth before sliding down her body and
finding her core, pressing his lips to it and tasting her juices. They were
sweet, earthy . . . fresh. Rare as well, and with Hermione crying out with
pleasure, he held her thighs firmly and drank at that still undiscovered
fountain, enjoying himself immensely. There was something that flavored the
young witch that he found compelling.
Her innocence. He gently assailed her softness with his lips, teeth, tongue and
nose until Hermione was nearly thrashing, her small hands tugging at his hair as
she keened, Snape bringing her to her first oral climax and drinking down the
richness that leaked around her unbroken mantle. His cock felt as heavy as a
leaden pole as he tenderly licked away all the excess from her inner thighs,
Hermione falling still and panting, a far-away look in her eyes as she stared up
at the ceiling. It was as if the world itself had lost all substance and become
nothing more than a dream. It was the man kissing his way back up her body that
was the true reality. She hadn’t known contact with a wizard could be like this,
so overwhelming, so urgent. It was as if her entire body were hungry, starving
for only what he could deliver. Her skin was aflame, every nerve ending flared
and firing for his touch. She felt beyond naked, as if everything inside her was
exposed and wanting. She wanted to feel him on her, inside her, moving her,
reaching her.
Helplessly she whispered this against his mouth, not caring how she sounded or
what he might think of her, need overpowering, thought, modesty, embarrassment .
. . anything that might have kept her silent only moments before.
He murmured something back. She couldn’t register his words, only the sound of
his voice, deep, silken, beautiful as his body shifted and he rested his
hardness against her apex, slowly rubbing it back and forth, the delicious
sensation making her body quake, her hands helpless clutching at his buttocks,
pulling against him, feeling how slick his body was with sweat as she felt him
flex.
”Now, Miss Granger,” Snape purred, his black eyes drinking her need in. Yes, she
was a passionate little witch, the kind a man would remember and want again and
again, particularly when she came into her own. No, she didn’t inspire the
darkness in him that her counterpart did, the maddening urge to possess and
punish even as he took his pleasure. But she inspired tenderness, a desire to
complete her, to take her where she wanted to go.
He adjusted her shifting body as best he could, placing her in the Missionary
position and lifting himself up on one hand as her brown eyes rested on him,
liquid, needful and questioning all at once. What a look it was. He parted her
thighs and pulled back a bit so he could rest his thick head against her core,
and the thin membrane that separated them. Hermione rocked under him, tilting
her pelvis reflexively, moaning as she felt him press against her, raising his
upper body. He stared down at her, feeling her softness giving slightly against
the pressure of his rigid member.
”Wrap your arms around my neck, Miss Granger,” he said to her softly. “Hold on
to me.”
Hermione did, her mouth parted and moist as she stared up at him, totally taken
by her own desire. Snape took a moment to kiss her softly, drawing back slowly
and meeting her eyes. Hermione felt him tense for a moment as he held his
breath. Then he drove forward, breaking the flesh and embedding his cock deep
inside the witch as she let out a shuddering cry, her arms tightening, partially
pulling herself up from the bed as her warm and softness wrapped around him
tightly, clutching and sucking at the hard pole of flesh embedded in her body.
His penetration had hurt, but Hermione had never felt anything more right as the
wizard rested inside her, holding very still and lowering himself on her body,
his mouth finding hers again and kissing her tenderly. He didn’t pull thrust,
but pressed inside her, continuing foreplay for several minutes, connected to
the witch intimately under she began her own jerky motions wanting more.
And Snape gave her what she wanted, giving her easy, tender strokes as he kissed
her and caressed her, crooning his pleasure as her body caressed and bathed him,
those soft, inner walls sliding around him as he shifted, making sure to
stimulate her clit, Hermione moaning with pleasure as he moved inside her,
driving gently into her ache, which was intensifying, becoming sharper,
stronger, pulling her downward, making her react with more violence, thrusting
upward with more hunger. Snape read this and lifted himself up on his hands and
began to give her the power she needed to take her and him over the edge,
thrusting inside her deeply, but not too deeply. He had a big cock and could
probably cause her real pain. He found the depth and strength that she liked and
applied himself, jerking her body faster and faster, listening to her voice
become shriller and shriller, wincing a bit as she dug her nails into the small
of his back in reaction.
They flowed and rippled together as one body, point and counterpoint, sweat
streaming, wetting the sheets beneath them, Hermione’s cries rising and falling
rhythmically as the wizard on top of her gave her what she needed and received
his own reward when she let out a cry and melted around him, her orgasm flowing
hot and rich over his cock like magma.
”Yessss!” he hissed, letting go, letting pleasure tighten inside him then
explode, rushing down his spine, through his body and outward, shuddering as he
plunged deep inside Hermione, filling her with his seed, dropping to her body
with a satisfied groan and kissing her mouth as she shuddered under him. They
lay against each other, feeling their racing hearts slow, the professor
caressing her hair gently.
”One hundred points, Miss Granger,” he breathed against her temple with a sigh,
“and twenty-five more for the shower.”
Hermione barely registered this as she lay comfortable under his weight, feeling
him deflating inside her. Gods, that had been amazing.
After about ten minutes, Snape rolled off her and on to his back, looking up at
the ceiling.
”That was quite pleasurable for me, Miss Granger. I hope it was for you as
well,” he said to the witch.
Pleasurable? It had been . . . wonderful. He was wonderful. Hermione looked at
him.
”It was wonderful,” she said to him softly. She moved closer to kiss his cheek.
The wizard stiffened a little but allowed it. Still, the session was over now.
It was clear that the witch wanted to “cuddle” as she shifted closer to him.
Cuddling wasn’t allowed.
Snape was trying to figure out a way to tell Hermione this, when there was a
tinging sound, originating from the dresser. Snape quickly sat up in the bed and
slid out of it.
”That’s for me,” he said, walking over to the dresser and picking up a two-way
mirror. He stared into it.
”Severus Snape,” he said.
The image of a woman formed in the glass. She had red hair, blue eyes and a
lovely full mouth. She quirked her lips at him
”Hey lover-boy,” she purred at him.
”Triska!” Snape replied, clearly delighted.
Hermione sat up in the bed, listening as the naked wizard talked to another
woman in the mirror. She felt . . . forgotten as he picked up his wand and
wordlessly Scourgified himself.
”So, have you finished with your nine o’clock?” the witch asked him.
”Yes, just now,” he replied, picking up his boxers with one hand and stepping
into them as Hermione watched, feeling a bit cold inside. She could hear the
woman clearly.
”So how was it, popping a cherry?” she asked him with a smile.
”It was good,” he replied. “She has a lot of potential. Very passionate for an
inexperienced witch.”
”Too bad she wasn’t the one you really wanted to get at,” Triska said, “but you
can take your frustrations out on me and Deidre when you come home this weekend.
Maybe I’ll glamour myself.”
Snape chuckled, then walked into the bathroom, collecting Hermione’s things as
he talked to his lover. He brought them back to her, placing them on the bed.
”You can get dressed,” he said, flicking his wand at her and cleaning her up,
then walking back and retrieving his housecoat and slippers, putting them on and
walking out into his study.
Hermione sat in the bed for a moment, then slowly climbed out of it, and began
to dress . . . . the feeling of connection and contentment . . . gone.
As wonderful as sex had been with the wizard, she could clearly see it meant
very little to him. As far as the Head of Gryffindor house went, it was business
as usual. Pleasant business, but business just the same.
Now fully dressed, Hermione walked into the study to find the wizard sitting
behind the desk, still talking in the mirror while wiping the laminated
parchment clean with a damp cloth, removing all the check marks he had placed
there earlier. He put it in the top drawer and looked up at Hermione with a
smile.
”I’ll be right with you,” he said to the witch, then, “Triska, I have to go.
I’ll see you and Deidre Friday night. Be ready, witch. It’s going to be a wild
ride for the both of you.”
Triska’s laughter rang from the mirror.
”Good night, Severus. Love you.”
”Love you too,” he said.
The mirror returned to a regular reflection and he placed it on the desk, then
rose and walked around it, approaching Hermione, who looked at him rather
blankly as he smiled down at her.
”I’ve recorded your extra credit, Miss Granger,” he said to the witch, offering
her a pass back to Gryffindor tower. “You did well your first time. Now, go
directly to your house. Filch shouldn’t be a problem. Good night.”
”Good night,” Hermione said hollowly, turning and exiting the wizard’s quarters.
Snape stretched luxuriously, then headed for his own bedroom. He was relaxed and
tired.
He’d be good for the next few days.
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Hermione walked the halls of Hogwarts in a kind of daze. Sex with the professor
had felt so good. It seemed as if he really felt something for her, something
meaningful. But, that mirror call proved that he didn’t. She felt like a patient
he had seen or something, the way the woman asked if his “nine o’clock” was
finished. Then, he even gave her a kind of evaluation of Hermione’s sexual
performance.
Passionate for an inexperience witch.
There was another knot in her stomach now, one that had nothing to do with
desire, or attraction. It was . . . regret. She had allowed herself to get
caught up by her body’s urges and she really wasn’t ready for the reality that
was bound to follow. As attracted as she was to this world’s Severus Snape,
there was no hope of anything more with the wizard. It was clear he had a
private life he was satisfied with, and any intimacy with students was just part
of his job. Maybe a part that brought him pleasure, but it was within an
established framework, with rules and limitations. He wasn’t invested in those
he shared himself with.
And in this world, that was completely acceptable.
But in Hermione’s world . . . it stung.
Gods, she was so ready to go home now. Tonight’s encounter proved without a
doubt, this wasn’t the world for her. She could never adapt to either the
cruelty or the freedom. Every time she saw the professor now, she knew that it
would hurt her heart. Unlike him, she had invested her emotions in their
encounter; felt it was something special that happened between them.
The truth was . . . it wasn’t.
And the truth hurt.
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A/N: A very mixed chapter. I think it was important to show just how not made
for this world Hermione is. She gave in to her urges and tried to get with the
program and traditions. I think she turned to Snape because he was familiar and
kind, a kind of port in the storm and it was easy to pretend he had some
personal attraction to her. And he was kind in his way, and good to her.
Patient, tender and so forth. But it was all within the structure of his
culture. So while her physical experience with Snape was good, she was
unprepared for the emotional wasteland that followed. In fact, our Hermione saw
the AU Snape much like her counterpart originally saw our Snape, as a familiar
port in a storm, a taste of home. Unfortunately, she was mistaken as well.
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