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Ms_Figg. Testing Review Board. :)
Severusism Poor Severus... Thank god you put your stories on this website...what would i do without my daily dose of SS/HG?
beeky63 Well Severus got his apprentice and it does look like she will be able to help him test his potion, only not the way he expected. Lol! Great work can't wait for more. Toodles.
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LOL, can't wait for Hermione to "notice" the results of Snape's little summer "experiments"! Ah, Ms_Figg love your stories; they are so much fun...delightful, yet devious, Dumbledore talking about Snape "sharpening" his tool...too funny :o) I am sure Hermione will eventually like to help Snape...then let the lemons roll!
chatty: Another sev/hemione story? yippie!!!! *bouncing around* this one sounds good. And i hope its going to be another cat and mouse game. update soon Ms_figg, cant wait for the next chapter. :D
Ch. 1 "Hard Times" Actually guffawed myself silly over the original potion testing on the various volunteers… especially tucking it in the sock so they could walk about!!! LOL Hate to see that one stiff! Think Pinocchio-Down-Under! Gads girl, you’ve brightened my day! -- Darque Hart
That poor little niffler! Snape caught with his pants down that was classic. bridges2
More Ms_Figg... I love your stories they make me laugh to no end... Please write faster, I'll loan you my muse but she seems to be on strike.
Ch 1 & 2 - Well that's interesting. Hermione better look out. Stormi
that is priceless, i wonder what sevvie will be humping.
beeky63 Oh! The next chapter is gonna be good!! Can't wait. Toodles.
ccrawley10: A dr hyde/mr jeckell potion--very interesting. Like the story so far.
OMG!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA Hard time indeed! I wonder what will happen when He gets sex crazed like the little niffler did? Watch your back Hermione!!! Ithilin
I just realized what the title of the story meant...Hard Times...Duh! *clonks self on head*...LOL Snape trying the potion out on himself along with the niffler; if the niffler humped its exercise wheel will the Potions Master be humping his potions' table? Or will he take matters into his "own hands"? Yummy, sexually enhanced Snapey...wwhhheeee, Hermione is such a lucky ducky! :o)
i was feeling peaky and this chapter perked me right up :>
Ch. 2&3 You've had me in hysterics over the last two ch. I'm going to be giggling in my sleep tonight! This is so funny and you have a wicked sense of humor! Looking forward to the rest! ~Darque Hart~
Denise: Chp 1-3: yay! another HG/SS!! YES!! i am sooo happy! i like the new story...seems like the professor got himslef into a bind!Pleaes update soon!
Twilight: Oooohhhh..... quite interesting. No matter the plot, if it is SS/HG, you have me entertained.
beeky63 Can't seem to stop repeating myself - can't wait for the next update. Please don't do a naked Filch, I still haven't gotten over a naked Peter Pettigrew. Lol. Toodles.
Another brilliant story from you! You are absolutely amazing. I have an ear to ear grin on my face.
pokerfan-- OMG--this is hysterical....can't wait to see what your lemons your sick mind (which we all love BTW) will come up with ...still LMAO... and poppy and filch?? ewwww
chatty: Hyde-severus? lol! This is good and i love it. So severus have no memory of being a hyde...? Hmm. i dont think how he can explain it to hermione. Please upate soon :)
Ohmigod, I choked on my orange when I was reading Hyde-Snape ravaging Hermione's knickers...so funny, so outrageous...so entertaining! Thanks for the laughs. No potions tables to hump (like the poor niffler's exercise wheel) only knickers...LOL does Snape have a fetish we should know about? Ah, and poor Hermione having to come home and find the result of his *indiscretions*...Snape should be required to buy her an entire wardrobe of new lingerie (Maybe Hermione will model it for him in the end?) for the *mess* he made. Man, you just can't housetrain those Hyde-Snapes...Bad Snape, Bad! *searches for the rolled up newspaper* Thanks again for the story!!
priceless, snape jacking off in her panties.
bahahah is hermione going to get a surprise when he turns to speak with her?!
JW - Ch 1 - omigosh, those test potions are HORRIBLE! It'll be a miracle if he still has a good professional reputation with those "results." Bad Severus! And wait 'til Hermione finds out..
JW - Ch 2 - more bad Snapey! He definitely should've observed the niffler for a longer period. Hmm, did Hermione really leave...
JW - Ch 4 - truthfulness? Uh-oh... And I wonder what would happen if a woman (test subject: Hermione) accidentally swallowed the test potion. Hmm, definitely time for a test observation. Thanks for updating!!
chatty: eww. two litres of come? lol. thats hilarious. i wonder if he has any more left. its going to get interesting now. If severus takes the potion in front of Hermione and... he becomes hyde! lol. Cant wait for the next chapter. Please update. :D
2 liters! my my, What is she in for ?
beeky63 WOW! Severus gives new meaning to the incredible hulk. Love it! Toodles.
ccrawley: So go to have her call him on his unknown actions. So looking forward to the next chapter when the experiment is repeated.
Awesome so far!!!!
Snapelover11: Nice one Figgy! This could prove to be very interesting indeed. And possibly a tad beastly...hahaha...get it?
that is so funny and now hermione's gonna be around when he turns into hyde-snape again, i'm killing myself laughing.
Snapelover11: Hurry up would ya? I am interested to see where this will go. Will she want regular Severus or animal Severus? Update soon!
Pam Love it. Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
i fear for her safety if hyde snapey had gotten through the door.
this story is great.....keep up your execellent work
JW - Ch 5-6 - this is definitely not like any other story I've read!! He's crazy for trying the potion again; shouldn't Hermione be trying to identify which ingredients to modify so that it WON"T have the same results? Oops... maybe Hermy wants to see the potion "as is"....
Koda: Can't wait for chapter 7..
Alex:That.Is.Perfect. You've got me hooked by the nose,as usual. Please, please write moooooore! I hope everything goes OK with your phone. :)
wow. story going good. Cant wait for the next chapter. How is hermione going to handle a very naked and a randy severus? lol
WOW! Dr.Jekle and Mr. Hyde! This is an awseome story! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon1 Your biggest fan, Tiffany
this is absolutely the most delicious story about an apprenticeship that i have ever read. do you know how much i love you? you are amazing. the ideas never seem to stop flowing out of you. this is just delicious. hope to read more soon! - schenleygirl aka ren.
JW - Ch 7 - ooh, cliffhanger!!! I just hope the ROR is smart enough to keep that safety stuff up. And what if it takes several days for the potion to wear off??
Koda: Great chapter, but I'm late for class! Ta-ta!
LOL I love this!! I know when i write i draw from life, I'm beginning to think id like have your life LOL or at least the sex part!!
Ch 7 -- What can I say after, "accio pussy"? Talk about a sex magnet! How frustrating. So much joy to be had, so little space to put it in. Sorry to hear about more Real Life problems. That you keep writing and trying to publish online is above and beyond the call, y'know. Thank You for the efforts. ~Darque Hart~
"Accio pussy" hahahahahahaha do you know how many times I would wish I heard those words from him????? though a cock the size of a 2 litre pop bottle scares me a bit but that doesn't mean I wouldn't try? giggle
Hey, just thought you should know, if you keep having problems with your story on the net, you could just make a livejournal account (which is free) and then you could update on there! And you wouldn't have to worry about hosting, or paying for the site - I mean you could name your livejournal the burning pen - and if you did get a paid account (approx $20 for the year) you can customise your livejournal to look like this site! It's just a thought, cause I know RL can suck - oh, and the reviews can still be given on livejournal - and you can reply to them on there (they would be through the 'comments' ability) Anyway, give RL a kick... and tell it to stop bugging you! We need more lines like "Accio pussy" to keep us going! Lol! Well done!
AngelEyez wow. that was an exciting chapter. wonder if the ROR will let him get it. cant wait for the next chapter.
I love this story so far. You are simply amazing!! Luvssnape
testing new input
lol. thats quite an experiment. cant wait for the next part. want to see how they end up... err... together. :)
beeky63 - WOW that was some performance the professor put on for Hermione. How long will it be before we see some lemons? Thanks for putting up a photo of yourself. It is good to see the face behind the fan fiction, and I hope I look as good as you when I'm a grandmother. Toodles.
Ch8- Perfection! I wonder if Severus will be as collected as he is now, after he sees the pensieve! Lol. Poor Hermione! She is really brave going near to that...that.. thing!Hyde-Severus is such a reatarded cave man! Please keep on writting Ms_Figg! You are brilliant! Btw, nice photo!
You are one hell of a writer Ms.Figg. I'm loving the way this story is turning out. Keep up the good work.
Wow. I'm actually speechless... As big around as a 2 litre? "Hard times" indeed!!! This is quite a change, but really interesting as well. I'm anxious to see where all this is going, anxious for the lemons, too! Things should be really hot the way these two are at each other already!!! Gosh! Can you just imagine those sultry black eyes looking at you while he touches himself? Whew, but it's hot in here! You really bring out the best of Severus! Update soon and as always happy writing, dear!!! Tengo que irme!Salud! Hugs, Killer K :O ps are you really a grandmother?! You just don't look it!
excellent. i was wondering what he might say to her. i would have been fighting the chair, hehehe. sex in the name of magic, what a way to live out your fantasies. i hope he does intend to test it on her. *smirks*
OMG---I just about pissed myself reading the last line for chapter7...LOL This was hysterical. These lemons are gonna be awesome.....PLEASE HURRY
yaahoo! Get that memory to him pronto! I want to read his reaction! That thing he turne into was gross...too much "come everwhere" visuals! Ah well...let's just hope they sort all that out and get to some lemons. Hurry up Figgy!
Every story just gets hotter and more imaginative. I'm really impressed with your talent.
gods. bring the talking chapter fast! Cant wait for the new chapter.
Update soon... you can't leave us there with that!
Chapter 9 was great. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Now they both know that they want each other. Do I smell lemonade in the making? I certainly hope so. Fantastic as usual. Can't wait for more. Toodles.
Ooh...a talk, eh?I sense a very sour lemon coming...
woohooo time for some lemons.....
I hope it gets interesting. :)
wow. loving it so far. can't wait to see the "talk". lol. update soon!! also are you going to be posting these stories up on AFF.net??
wow chapter 10 was awesome.....you really are amazing. you write so quickly and it is still really good work...keep it up!!! i would go with B mainly because i would be afraid he would transform into the monster and kill me. or maybe not tell him and see if getting sex stops him from transforming.
JW - re Summit problem - can you put up a landmail address (post office box or something) for us folks who can't stand to use Paypal?
Here you go June. And here's to hoping no one will drop by unannounced. I get very snarky when that happens. <eg> You know how we semi-recluses get. lol. R. Solomon 198 Autumn Dr. Lot 15 Fairhope, AL 36532
the potion has to kick in now isnt it? She better get out of the room before or she'll be fucked to death. lol. cant wait for the next chapter.
ARRRGGGGHHHH! DON'T STOP NOW! Pretty please with a cherry on top.
Damn cliffies! *shudder* WOW!
so glad I waited up for this :) Wowza..... Keep em coming
I followed you here from AFF. I've only read the first chapter of this story and I already woke up my son in the next room by laughing too loudly. You have a wicked sense of humor, not to mention a gift for writing erotica. I was happy to see a picture of you. It's nice to see the face behind the AFF legend!
Seems like a good way of stopping the transformation...
Great story. I love all your story's. Thanks.
Ooh. I'm liking this one so far. Only thing though, is that I have bad eyesight (even with my glasses) and the yellow text on a black background hurts my eyes.
Hey...at a little one day 4 hour gig, so am online. You didn't leave your name reviewer, but I saw your review about the bright yellow hurting your eyes so made the text gray. I hope it makes it easier for you to read. I don't think any other readers will mind. I am going to try to write a chapter here at work, and put it up
Oh Figgy...I wish you had a little moe income! lol That way I wouldn't have to agonize over your stories not being posted! (Oh yeah and so you can have piece of mind too....I meant that.) Keep going Figgy! I love this one!
21 reviews, and you haven't even posted the link yet. :) Shows how dedicated we are. Or impatient, I'm not sure. Severus is evilllll.
Not reviews, hits. Sorry. :)
sevvie is gonna use and abuse his golden glow.
Never been disappointed yet with one of your stories Ms Figg and this one is no exception. Glad to hear the phone situation was resolved...the Lord will provide.
Thank you so much for changing the text. I don't have to highlight the words to read them now. Sorry I forgot to put my name before.
thank god u are still updating. Was checking ur website with my fingers crossed and voila! another chapter. I hope it becomes a cat and mouse story. Its a long time since u have written something like that. waiting for the next chapter.:)
Good to have you back, I really missed you even though you weren't gone very long. Another great update, but what is Severus up too? Can't wait to find out. Toodles.
Love her revenge. Oh, they are having such a passionate little thing right now. Does she or does she not put a female snake in there, I hope not.
I've been reading this and its a wonderful story. I can't help but feel sorry for Severus at being turned into a Snake. It's in his nature to be sneaky so I don't begrudge him for doing what he did. Heck, I expected nothing less. I can't help but think he's smarter than that, to let her get away with turning him into a snake. I mean she did enjoy his attentions after all. Too bad he needs her when he glows. Maybe she needs to beg him for something too.
I've been reading this and its a wonderful story. I can't help but feel sorry for Severus at being turned into a Snake. It's in his nature to be sneaky so I don't begrudge him for doing what he did. Heck, I expected nothing less. I can't help but think he's smarter than that, to let her get away with turning him into a snake. I mean she did enjoy his attentions after all. Too bad he needs her when he glows. Maybe she needs to beg him for something too.
Love Severus being turned into the snake, funny stuff! Glad to see you back!
Ahh...yes...that was nice. But he was way too gentle and took his time. Not the "glowing" Severus, was he? Now....poor guy. All coiled up with no where to go....I hope she does put a female in there. It would be interesting. Keep them coming Figgy! I love 'em.
Oh! That was just brilliant! Turning Severus into a snake, I just loved it. Severus should know better that to mess with Hermione. Great update. Toodles.
lol! i've stopped breathing now/ Severus? a snake?lol. gods... i wonder wht will happen if she releases him. Or whateer happens. cant wait for the next chapter.
that was excellent.
Lol.. this'll be great. I wonder how he'll react if she does put a female snake in there.
Wow, that's just a fun ending to the chapter :)
I love the story! Sorry I haven't reviewed, I am stealing peeks here and there, but this is something different, and it works in your very capable hands! Love the hex!
Ha ha, this is seriously the second time today I've been the 1st viewer of a new chapter. Okay, well, the first time, I was the 2nd, but still! Shows how much I check ; )
Twilight: Lucky, lucky witch indeed. I am green with envy. ~_^
oh no! u cant stop there. make him drink that potion and get him into action! Hermione is one lucky witch. Damn her! lol. waiting for the next chapter. :)
beautiful. simply beautiful. clever about the snake. i always wondered if you were going to do that to him since his is such a slithering bastard, but a damn hot one at that! happy v-day and thank you for cheering me up with more chapters! much love!
Perhaps she told him her plans, because subconsciously she wants him to succeed in seducing her!
Sorry I haven't reviewed before now- what a joy to come here and have 15 chapters of a new story to read! Short, huh? Not possible! Once you get going, you always flesh a story out nicely. This one is good and I've laughed out loud several times. I hope when he and Hermione next get together, he'll give her some foreplay. No one writes these two like you, MsFigg. Kudos on another excellent read! Laura
Btw, thanks for putting up the pic of yourself- nice to put a face to the name! :-) Laura
ch16: evil evil cliff!!! aaaaaaaaaarghh! Update soon Ms_figg, lol. Wonder wht will happen next. I cant believe severus is actually retiring easily in this story *whining*. I hope he gives her good afterwards that she cant walk. anyway. even this severus is good when it comes from you. waiting for the next chapter.:)
Chatty: Now you know Severus better than that. He isn't retiring, he is 'biding his time.' In my stories he has a habit of being nice to Hermione for the most part, appearing to give in, even when he has lascivious plans for her. Trust me, he has no intention on letting her serve out the rest of her apprenticeship unscathed. lol
hehehehehe...I am so gidy waiting for this. hey, BTW, the image on the front page doesn't work.
Hey Snapelover11 and all: I put a link to my video message at the top of this page and on the entrance page. Actually I was bored and taking a writing break when I made this. Am getting started on chapter 17 in a few. ****
oohwheee...i can't wait to see this next scene. btw...are you going to update your other story?? i started reading that one and i like it so far. just wondering... cant wait for chapter 17!!
I've just finished reading all your stories. Lord, they are so sexy, they are! Lol. H/SS Forever. You are soo cute, lol, I loved your video message. =) I hope I look as young as you do when I'm a grandmother. Keep writing, can't wait for cahpter 17 =) Love Chloe.
you are so evil..I swear you did this on purpose.....please hurry and update :)
ARGH!!!!!! do hurry with that update!!!! *taps foot impatiently* I really wanna see how ol' Snapey reacts to Hermione turning on the heat! *snickers* Ithilin
Yay! I'm so glad you have your own site as well as posting at PotionMaster! I love your erotica stories and, considering you are not British, I think you a very good job at keeping the characterization British. When I'm reading your stories, I totally visualize them as British characters, not American, despite a few Americanisms here and there. I'm American too and know how difficult it is to write with proper Britishisms -- I've attempted to start several fics but never got past the first couple chapters. Maybe I should turn my ideas over to you so that you can write them -- you are always so good with having a relevent plot and the erotica is HOT! PWP is not easy to write and you do a fantastic job! More soon please! I'm so greedy!
Great chapter... I hope the chains keeping you are working... cause we need another chapter fast!
Oh God. That was so hot. Lol! Omg, keep up this amazing work. I always oictued you to be a little old lady for some reason. haha. You are far from that. =) Love Chloe
Yahooo!Oh yeah! Tht was great....more more more!
wow. awesome chapter. it was kinda cruel for you to just leave it there...but its more for the next chapter!! please post it up soon.
omg ANOTHER evil cliffe?!?!?!!?!?!??! Update soon Ms_figg! *banging head on wall* i have to know what happens now.
Whew - HOT! More more more more more
so evil.....and so freakin HOT!
You're one of the only authors I went through the trouble of tracking down to their other pages after AFF went down. TOTALLY WORTH IT. Teehee. Yours is by far the best SSHG smut I've ever read. Hope you never, EVER run out of ideas!
wheres the next chapter? it should be by now. lol. yeah im kinda getting desperate to read it. Its that good!
Oh, nasty...Hermione denied Severus... She'll get it real hard next time..*Cackles* Yours is the most realistic SSHG i've ever read,Ruth...Hopefully you'll get some more fantastic ideas to keep us randy fanfic worshippers glued forever to your awesome site. P.S You don't look old...
Sev: Well, I'm not exactly old...in my opinion anyway. I'm going to be 45 this year. Glad you're enjoying the story :) Thanks for the review.
Loving it! Really hoping to see some Slytherin Schemeing soon! Wonderful job as usual.
Well, I think Hermione got what she asked for as far as his treating her indifferent. I hope she realizes that at some point. I mean, if she said that night would be their last, did she expect him to be fawning all over her? I think Severus is being smart. She'll come to him sooner or later. I think also, once she sees he cut her in on the profits, her opinion of him might change too.
ooh yeah... two chapters. :) was awsome. Totally interesting. waiting for the next chapters.
ch 20 : I love a crafty Snape ! What does he have in store for young Eric ?
Arg, you're evil!
I am so glad this isn't over :O Want more lemons please...and just as I type this...what song comes on but "Lemon" by U2...LOL So ironic :)
Ch. 18 - Just curious... if Sev's "Liquid Wood" overcame the Impotence Potion, and since HG stewed in Severus's juices all night without scourgifying herself ...maybe that enhancement potion might be strong enough to overcome Hermione's contraceptive patch??? Could it be that with the Jekyll and Hide thing that his sperm is enhanced to the point of swimming passed the contaceptive? Even if it doesn't, it'd be an interesting idea.
The enhancement potion is nowhere near as powerful as it was when it turned Severus into the sex monster. Hermione diluted the strength of it by 90% as well as substituted other ingredients. All it is now basically is liquid viagra. lol
omg! lol. that was too good. I loved the scene with Hermione and the garden spears. lol. Gosh. its too good. Severus is totally something else. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Ooooohhhh...... he is evil! Nice work!
Just a little note. Whoever is praying for me, it's working. I had an unbelievable day today. Thank you.
I am so glad you had a good day :) You deserve it :) Dominatrix hermione was awesome...but i wanna see the real dominatrix hermione come out when she finds out what sevvie did....teehee
Ohh...evil and scary Sev! I like him! lol Oh, what will hermione do if she ever finds out? Oh, Figgy, please do tell us why you had a good day! We share in your hard times and your good. I am so happy it was a god day for you. There is always sunshine my friend...
Saw your pic! Your a lovely gal. Anyhow, dropped in here since AFF isn't allowing posting. Entertainignand quite fun with lots of smut. what can I say? :)
really? i cant believe you did that, but then again if i were in his spot, i'd do it too. absolutely beautiful! i love this story, well, really, all your stories. i think he might be falling for her in his own posessive slytherin way. amazing, keep it coming. love you!
"professor, I dreamed I had a check for ten thousand galleons" LOL!!!! i almost fell off the chair after reading that. damn. lol. SHe must have been dreamin a lot lately. cant wait for more.
Well, I'd say you always deserve a good day!45 is very young...
And just wondering, whats the problem with the AFF posting of chapters? Not that i dont love this site, of course, but just a little curious...
Sev: AFF was having probs with their servers initially, but now they are moving the entire site to another host, which is a big undertaking because the site is huge. They were planning on moving for a while. They estimate they will be up and running by March 1st. It will be cheaper for them to run the site, and they get more for the buck. I miss AFF too.
wonderful chapters, i just finally got back online and got to read all the great updates.....keep up the awesome work...update soon.....
oh goody-goody-gumdrops! Lemons!!! Whoot!
awsome story. keep it up.
me adore.
Was the speech a warm up for the lemons?Well, showing how similarly alone in the world they both are certainly seems to work...
wonderful chapter
Ohhh if she doesnt just go fuck him i sure will ;) Come on Hermione go rock his world LOL
Whew! Who could possibly resist a speech like that. Are we coming to the end soon? I would really like to see you write a different HG/SS story. Istead of a Slytherin sex-god Severus seducing Hermione (don't get me wrong, those are the best stories and you do them so well) I would love to read your take on a untrusting Severus who has known to much rejection pursued by a loving Hermione. Something to think about, maybe? Toodles.
if nothing could take her down, that speech would! lol. can hardly wait for what will happen.
You write the some of the best stories I've ever read ms.figg. Keep up the good work!
awesome story. loved the speech he gave her. lets hope she gets her ass in that room soon...cant wait for the next chapter and the LEMONS!!!!
Well, I am going to tell you one thing... you can't write a PWP because any story you write developes into an amazing story, even if it's intended to be a PWP :D But that's a good thing you know. You write amazingly long fics with lemons and a believable plot while keeping the subjects in character :) ps: I read one of the reviews for your story on AFF where it says that you can't write... don't mind them. They're just jelaous of your amazing writing skills and that you have more stories published than any other HG/SS writer I have come across so far (and believe me, I have read quite a few stories because I seem to be addicted to the pairing) not to mention that your fics are original and well written, which is more I can say for most of the HG/SS fics (including my extremely failed attempts *lol*). Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your fantastic writing soon ;) in case you want to comment my ranting, my email is goddes_snape@email.si
hey...you said lemons were next..... But damn...this was a great chapter :)
wow! that was a steamy little scene at the end. i cant believe sev wants everyone to know about them. that would count as a relationship and that could lead to other things... well ill let your amazing mind run wild with the ending to this tale, not mine. bedtime! goodnite! you rock and so does chapter 24! yay!
She picked the right choice, thank god for her smarts...
Ren: Hermione realized that if Severus intends to confront wizards who hit on her in his presence, then their relationship will become public knowledge as a result of that choice. Not saying he will cry it from the rooftops, but he will let others know Hermione is wands-off.
Are you a fan of Alan Rickman? You know, the guy who plays Snape in the movies...
Wands off?He'll probably go like:'Dont stick your wand in my wife's cauldron'.You know what i mean by cauldron...yes, in a twisted way...
And when will the next Chapter for Sahara be?That story's interesting...cant wait to see how the plot will be develop...
oh ya... go on hermione! is this going to develop into a bigger story? atleast till when severus makes his affair public? lol.i can imagine severus dragging hermione by her hair into a cave and wave his club at the others. lol. update soon. have to see what happens next. :)
ch 24 : hope the next chapter soon, I need something to cool me down !
OH MAN, first i wake up to.... not this morning dear i dont feel like it and then remember someone was making lemonaid here only to get the grand tease..... god your good, keep writing or ill explode!!!!
Great post, I love this story. Please post again soon. Thanks.
goood. update fast
Just popped by to let you know how much I am enjoying your story! Been working like crazy lately, so not much time to respond, but I so look forward to reading the updates!
we want more, i loved the line about hermione being his kingdom.
FINALLY!!! I must have checked this page a hundred times today! And...there is more to come...I still want Hermione to find out what Sev did to Eric...LOL
Wow, you've got Hermione panting again.
Up to chp 25! Wow Ms-Figg...another great story in the making.Can't wait to see what Hermione does to Sevie when she finds out about Eric though....?And what about feedback from the 'golden trio'boys?LOL? By the way...nice to finally put a face to the writing genius you are.(waves!)Keep writing....!!
wow my glasses are steamed from reading that.
omg. finally she decides to post it. hottt chapter. i want chapter 26 like now....cause this is getting me so worked up and i need them to finish what they started. please post soon!!!
Thsi is cruelty, Ms Figg! You cant leave Chapter 25 hanging there!Great work...
thats awsome! Cant wait for more. update soon. (._.)
SMOKING!!!! Nuff said.
final chapter, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! we need lots and lots of sevvie.
Such an excellent chappie...SIGH.... "all good things must come to an end.." Can i ask why? Who made up that stupid saying anyway...please don't stop :) Just keep going and going.....
yesss... awsome lemons. *looking dazed* waiting for the next chapter.
i love your stories their great i hope you keep writting
I LOVED IT! I can't wait to read your next story you start.
Aww, such a sweet ending. Can't wait for your next series.
Awww sweet ending..... ^_^ I look forward to your next story.
that was so sweet! you horrible witch! i knew you would go the romantic road. ah, well, it was just so sweet! what a way to end, *sigh*. i enjoyed this story imensely and am glad you chose to end it so soon. it could have turned corny, but you always know when to end it. it was just so great that now im rambling. i hope you start another one soon. oh, the possibilities. anyway, have a great week! love you!
Awww. My tummy feels all mushy now. =) I love it. I really hope you write a new story soon. You always have the best ideas. Love you.
Good ending. That potions master definitely deserved the levicorpus spell. lol. hilarious. ms_Figg! its time for a bad snape! i've been missing ur bad bad snape for quite a while. Please write a fic with ur bad snape in it. hehe. Anyway, whatever u write, im waiting to read. See u next story. :D
my favorite part was when sevvie said he would defend her honor, that made me so sappily happy. write another story very soon.
Another wonderful story, Ms_Figg. The highest praise I can give you comes from Stephen King's <i>Dark Tower</i> series: Hile, Wordslinger. From my heart, I thank thee.
Marvolous story, Ruth!Great plot, beautiful ending.Looking forward to your next works!
It's over. Sigh! It was so good. Yum! And now time for another story. Oh the anticipation! Toodles.
awwwwwww...that made my day :)
aww... I knew you couldn't resist making a scene like that... and I absolutely love it! :D I will be expecting another story from you soon ;)
I have been following your stories for (what feels like ever) months, and i love every single one of them. I like the characters, love the plot and don't get me started on the sex scenes. I love everything and i look forward to your next story. Great job, and keep up the great work.
Wonderful story as always! Looking forward to your next.
Wow, another terrific story! Severus did go a bit soft there at the end (not where it counted, of course ;) but I liked it! Very glad to be able to read this at your site. One thing about it, tho, is that I have to highlight each page to be able to read the text. Otherwise, it's too dark. I must be getting old and my eyes bad but it's certainly worth it! Keep up the great work and thanks for continnuing it- Laura
Another wonderful story Ms. Figg, enjoyed it greatly!
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wonderful story....i cant wait to read the next one
Always happy to see a new story from you! *tries to read as much as possible before work*
Like all your stories this one had scenes that were so HOT! Absolutely loved it. Thanks for writing such a great fic. :)
this last chaper was great, especially the way Hermione dealt with the blatant sexism. And never apologize for romance. The words you make Severus say are so endearing, you honestly could try writing a romance w/o the lemons and it would be every bit as good.
An English man doesn't have a purse. It would be either a wallet or a portmonnaie. However it is a humorous plot.
I am addicted to WAFF and I really felt very good about the ending. I have been married to a wonderful woman for over 40 years and I regret only one thing and that is that the years went by so swiftly. I knew early on that it would be over far too quickly. Regretfully, I was right. Well written. Hard in some aspects, but well worth the reading.
not bad, however i think it doesn't have the same feeling your others have given me but good story nonetheless. Oh I bought your book, The Language of Souls (that is the right name, right?). I'm waiting for it to arrive. Can't wait. Blessed Be, Kirsten
Oh my, I really really like it. I think you played him very well and very in-character! I like him as himself ;-) Very good work
Hey Miss_Figg, Edania here again. Don't know if you remember me from AFF. Well anyway i couldn't help but read this other story. I never seen this one on adultfanfiction so i thought i take a look and wow i loved it from start to finish , every hot moment, not to rough, not to romatic but just right and a great ending too. It had its laughs and its real hot moments. I can say the least , both Herm and Sev are made for eachother right, in this fic anyway. one of best by far. I hope your well and you keep on writing many stories to come with our favorite pair. --- Edania
superb ending... sure satifies the romantic person in me...
Love your work... all your stories and I'm enjoying your creativitie, talent and imagination. Hope to read always new stories from you. By the By... Snape glowing? mmmm...
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wonderful!!!! I love your work!
I have just made a very important discovery. I am addicted to lemons, and I am completly okay with that. Sleep is highly over-rated anyway. Thank you, dear lemon dealer, for the fix. May your lemon trees continue to florish.
aww i love it when they admit love in the end, i love the rawness of their relationship but am a complete sucker for happy endings!
